Room 4 started persuasive writing here my writing about homework.
Why we should have no homework
Hi I will talk to you about why we should have no homework.
1. It wastes your time when you want to play with your friends, your parents and your dogs here's some examples me and Grizz are lying on the
bean bag because it's fun with Grizz. But mum calls homework to me when I am playing outside with my friends and I have to go in to do my homework.
Mum looks in my bag and my mum says “ok you two do your homework!” Another example is when me and my dad are shooting tin cans and he says
do you have any homework, yes he grabs my homework and he tells me to do it.
bean bag because it's fun with Grizz. But mum calls homework to me when I am playing outside with my friends and I have to go in to do my homework.
Mum looks in my bag and my mum says “ok you two do your homework!” Another example is when me and my dad are shooting tin cans and he says
do you have any homework, yes he grabs my homework and he tells me to do it.
2. It is a problem when you want to do your own thing but you can't because of homework.
Also it's really boring and you're just sitting there and doing nothing because the maths equations are super hard.
Also it's really boring and you're just sitting there and doing nothing because the maths equations are super hard.
3 Do you know how you sometimes like playing sports - imagine if you're playing sports and your mum yells come and do your homework!
It takes 20 minutes to complete and when you're about to go outside It's too dark to go outside nooo!
It takes 20 minutes to complete and when you're about to go outside It's too dark to go outside nooo!
4 I always have hated homework because I just don't like it. I like to play my games instead of homework.
Homework gets in the way when I'm playing outside, when you're playing on your iPad, when I'm playing with Grizz.
I am so sick of homework, I hope it never exists.
Homework gets in the way when I'm playing outside, when you're playing on your iPad, when I'm playing with Grizz.
I am so sick of homework, I hope it never exists.
By Quinn
Hi Quinn, It's Hannah here from Awahono School. I like your writing about why we shouldn't have homework. Next time you could write about why we should have homework. I also really like the examples you have used. From Hannah
ReplyDeleteHi, I'm Will from Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School and I really like the ways you described about that homework is lame and annoying to do. Even though my school has homework I never do it and my mum has forgotten about homework. So I don't have to do it. Hopefully your mum forgets about it so you don't have to do it. Maybe next you could do something of why homework should be banned from all schools. And yes I agree that there should be no homework. Thanks, Will
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